Criticism on this guide [1]
Misplaced Tag:
I see you did remove the ideas tag like I mentioned, but I’m still going to say what I did before:
This guide isn’t really worthy of an idea-related tag, as it’s not really giving me any ideas, but rather info on how to build a character.
This category doesn’t change the final rating
Grammar:
I like well-written guides, and this almost made it to my standards[2]
As far as I can tell, there is no grammatical error in this guide. But on that topic, there were quite a few punctuation errors.
Example:
Make sure to put a space after a comma.
Small suggestion:
If you replace the “and’s” in your article with an ampersand, it gives off a much more formal approach.
Grammar rating:
7.1/10
Previous rating
6.2/10, +0.9
Approach:
After revisions, this guide now has a somewhat clear voice. It’s a bit of a neutral/confident now.
Guides with a confident (and/or) formal approach tend to stick out better to the audience, boosting the amount of likes you’ll get and the overall positivity of the readers.
Voice rating:
7.4/10
Previous rating
4/10, +3.4
Formatting:
I am always picky on this aspect, so you should never expect a perfect rating from me on this category.
The formatting in this guide after the revision is ok. It could be better.
Examples of well-formatted guides
The Illusion of Life 📜: The Ultimate Guide to Gimkit Animation
[ 📜 ] Making Blade Ball in GKC (WIP) (5/10)
Now I know there are a lot of people with formatting guides for guides, but I’m not one of them. I know someone will show up later and give you one, or I wouldn’t be surprised if one hasn’t been made while I am typing this reply.
Small suggestion:
Drop-downs can either make or break your guide. Turning your whole guide into a bunch of drop-downs is not visually appealing. Breaking them apart with text is a great way to solve this issue.
Formatting rating:
4.2/10
Previous rating
3.4/10, +0.8
Final Rating:
… (another drumroll)
6.3/10
You went up +1.2 from the pre-revision rating!
Thanks for reading!