heya!
I’m bored out of my mind rn so I’ma just do smth fun and y’know kinda give some constructive criticism. you obviously don’t have to really listen, but it might help when making a guide!
remember, this is just my opinion so please don’t fight me!
(my capitalization isn’t working rn, button refuses to press half the time)
INTRODUCTION:
So you really didn’t have an introduction… which is kinda a problem. Introductions are one of the most IMPORTANT aspects of a guide. an introduction lures someone in, and welcomes them! I would always say to write a really good introduction, so your audience feels welcome!
FORMATTING:
I’m so very disappointed with your formatting. there is NOTHING. NOT A DROP. c’mon man, go format! there’s even a mini guide on it if you do the beginner tutorials. put some effort. Using formatting makes it 10x better
EXPLANATION:
well to be frank, there is none. You listed out steps, but you didn’t say why it works. you didn’t explain it in any shape way or form. it would’ve been better if you added something like, “The barrier prevents players from breaking the dynamic blocks!”
REASON:
The point of this section is not how you wrote the guide but why. Based off how much effort you put in, I can tell you didn’t write the guide to help people, you wrote it to farm likes, views, and popularity. The forums arent a place for this. If you’re going to post something, do it for the greater good. Lets be real, this was common information.
CONCLUSION:
Same as introduction, you basically have none. In a typical conclusion you would mention what you did in your guide, then bid your farewells. You basically wrote nothing, and that’s not really amazing. Put some effort in! It will make the guide SO much better.
So in conclusion, I feel like if you actually put effort into. guide it could be 10X better. Lets put some effort and make a good guide next time! Have a nice day!
