NavyCatZ here :DD
What you did well
Organization:
The dropdown menus make it easy to get to the information the reader needs. This is especially helpful for a guide like this that has lots of text and pictures. Without dropdown menus, it would be a hassle to have to have to scroll through the entire thing to get to where you need.
Simplicity to follow:
You are clear on how to configure the barriers and devices, which definitely makes the reader’s work a lot easier. The addition of pictures helps a ton with this. Furthermore, they provide examples on how to build the environment, which can also be a huge help for the reader.
Areas to work on
Proper grammar/English:
I know that grammar isn’t required on social media, but it still makes it a lot easier to get your point across when you take the time to refine it. This is especially crucial for making guides look professional and easy to read. Grammar mistakes can easily distract the reader and
make writing difficult to comprehend. That’d be quite detrimental to your work, don’t you think?
Consistency:
This can technically go into grammar, but I highly advise proofreading your work so that the formatting and/or subtitles look consistent.
Here are the three subtitles on your guide. The first one is in all lowercase. The second one follows proper English conventions. The third one seems to attempt to do that, but it’s not quite there (“By” is not capitalized in titles, and the last word of a title should be capitalized.) When you look at them together, it looks quite jarring. Additionally, when you mention the transparency levels of the barriers in “Desert Biome” and “Frost Peaks,” “transparency” is all lowercase in one, and in all caps(and misspelled) in the other. Again, make sure to proofread your work to catch any errors.
Organization:
I said you did well on this, so why am I mentioning it here? Well, there’s still room for improvement. For instance, if you want to make your guide more readable. it’d be helpful to bold these step subtitles-
Content:
There could definitely be more to this guide. You have a lot of weather biomes to choose from, after all. What about a rainforest in a thunderstorm, or a savanna with sweltering sunlight? Those are just a few examples.
Overall, the concept for this guide is alright, but there’s plenty of room for improvement. In particular, I highly recommend focusing on proofreading your writing to make sure it follows proper English conventions the next time you make a guide. That’d add a lot more to the quality of your work. NavyCatZ signing off!