Red Dead Redemption Ideas

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Its your boy again.

I have recently played Red Dead Redemption 2. I decided to return to gimkit after quite a while, to make a fan game. A major issue is that is not appropriate for 8 year olds. Any ideas how to dum it down and make cut-scenes.
I think ill find it difficult to tell the advanced story without profanity and violence. Any advice?

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First of all, explain the plot of the story and what you want to fix about the game. We need some detail to help.

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Sure,
Basically the game follow Arthur Morgan. A member of the Van Dir Linde Gang. It is set during the of the wild west. The leader of the gang, Dutch Van Dir Linde treats the members as his sons. Basically, the gang is running from the Pinkertons, a sort of police during the wild west.

The gang needs to escape the pinkertons and is always on the run. Most gang members are either “knocked out” if you know what I mean, or abandon the gang,. In the end, there is a rat revealed in the gang. Dutch betrays his sons and two of the surving members are on the run from micah (rat) dutch (traitor)

In the end, our main protagonist Arthur is “knocked out” in a battle with Micah. There is a little more but i will end the game there. The game is full of profanity and people getting 'knocked out"

I would like multiple aspects of the game,

  1. Multiple Items in the game mention and use illicit substances. This items are necessary for the plots progression, and making missions possible.
  2. The Profane Lanuage.
  3. My difficulty making cutscenes, how to make them
  4. If anybody could help me with character development that would be awesome a quick 101.
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  1. Use a dumber or substitute for the item if it’s cosmetically illicit, or change the name a little if it’s illicit that way.
  2. Substitute for “frick” or “shoot” or “bottom”.
  3. Use ONE camera point, and then use barriers or text to describe or show the cutscene. Here’s a guide on animating: The Ultimate All-In-One Resource Guide for Animation!
  4. Character Development? Do you mean dialogue or personality?
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Alright I gotchu watch:

  1. substances can be candy bars (because a little is good but too much is bad)
  2. the language can just be removed all together or at the very least just substituted with funny words.
  3. use a camera point and this guide
  4. uhhh I mean character development is a key part to a story and its already given to you by the original game so what would you need help with??
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I do not know how to develop characters. I see the character development but I don’t know how to do it personally.

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A characters personality changing over time.

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Give them something to work towards to become a better/worse person overall

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Please elaborate.

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A goal of sorts. Character arc.

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