Lemme read it first
Hey @wingwave, Argo Here
Nice guide on how to make Automatic Doors! Topics like this can get very intuitive very quick and this is a perfect example of it!
What you did well
The Intro was well done! Instead of a wacky intro, you got straight into the main point. And you had descriptive images that can help with trying to identify what you would need (Mostly Beginners). Lastly, you showed how we should wire things. So visual wise, this is good!
What I Suggest
The post is good but I suggest you show the wiring screen, else it might get confusing. If someone wires it the opposite way, the entire thing might not work and then some people would be complaining that this didnāt work.
Final Rating
My final rating for this will be an 9/10, the post is good and all parts are executed well but for beginners, it might spark some confusion, especially if they just directly came here.
Extra Notes
I also suggest making this a difficulty.
Cheers
-@Argo77
Alright, thanks! Iāll do that next time!
Hi @wingwave! Thanks for calling me to rate your guide!
Hereās my in-depth review of it:
What you did well:
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Clear title: The title is short and quick to read and understand and describes the guide well.
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Consistency: The guide maintained a consistent style, tone, and terminology throughout, giving it a professional and cohesive feel.
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Easy to understand: The concept is already a simple concept and the guide doesnāt use many complicated terms or anything like that.
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Visuals: The guide is full of several images which help the reader understand what theyāre learning.
Rooms for improvement:
- Examples: Why should the reader need a one-way automatic door? Can you provide examples for games or cases in which this could be used?
- You never mentioned to make it so when you enter the zone it hides the barrier. I assume you are supposed to do that, though?
All in all, this is a great guide that is educational and well-written.
I donāt rate guides with numbers because I feel that it sort of demeans the guide, but if you wish to get a number rating, let me know! PopBot out!
what about for the zone?
Oh, my bad. Sorry for interfereing.
Alright, thanks! I canāt edit it anymore, though.
bump because wingwaveās first guide!!!
strolls throughā¦
realizes Iām about to walk through a door! NO!!!
realizes Its wingwaves automatic door guide
phew! Iām fine. butā¦ have to do something first
BUMP!
Bumpity Bump Bump
you be bumpin a lot of topics
Agreed
how can you check if a new user joins the forums without looking through topics manually @WolfTechnology?
Check my bio if u want wolf
edit: TWO JOSHES?
You can check the users section, or click on the admin dashboard and select trust level and date j0ined. And will check that now.
Im super happy that you find me as your idol! That and ye, an ally of you would be great!
Its just either an alt of it is a user claiming to be them, check and see if there email is josh@gimkit.com
And I added you to the trustworthy and chill people on my bio @Caternaught .
I built an automatic door but when it didnāt automatically open I panicked. So I used a bumper car to break down the door.
automatic bump (whenever checkbox is clicked) :]
also replying will make it not work
SIGMA IS DELISH