How To Make A Mountain Biome (Top - Down)

Hello! This is a Mountain Biome I made In 1 of my maps And I wanted to share it with the forum. Here’s how I made it:

First Step

Scatter Around White Cracked Desert And Dynamic Stone

  • If You Don’t Have the Season Ticket, You Can Use Dynamic Sand Instead Of White Cracked Desert

    Small Sample Of What I Made
Second Step

Make Some Holes And Add Some Dynamic Stone, Dirt, Copper, Silver, Diamonds, Gold, And Rubys.


Small Sample Of What I Made

Props

The Props I Added Are Groundbreaking Plants With 76, 0, 76 Tint
Also Corn Stalk Empty With 76, 0 , 76 Tint
Also Grey Rocks With 76, 76, 76 Tint
Also Stakes With 76, 76, 76 Tint

Full Biome I Made

Hope You Can Implement This Mountain Biome Into Your Next Game!!!

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what if someone doesn’t have the season ticket (I have it)

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Oh. I forgot about this. They Could Use Sand Or Dynamic Sand Instead Of Cracked Desert

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Okay this is cute.

But it’s a little bit short :pinching_hand:
And a little.. plain

Here’s what I would improve on if I were you!


1: Formatting.

Formatting is SO SO SO important in guide making. And this guide really uh lacks it

SURE it has drop downs. But we could really do better than that frfr. Put some effort into formatting it’s SO worth it in the end!

Formats I recommend:

Headings (put a - on the line below a sentence)

Bold/Italic text

Lines (three asterisks make a line)

Just small things that can make your guide top notch!


2: Description

We love being able to understand things, and while this guide does give us a vague understanding on what to do, we could really make it better by specifying the terrain, the props, and overall just have more detail! Maybe even suggest alternatives.


3: Fun Factor

I’m gonna be straight with you when I say this guide was NOT fun to read. Its very.. robotic. You don’t have any fun descriptive words that can really grab a readers attention! You just lay out all the information with nothing else about it, which is like fine and whatever but adding a bit of stimulation to your guide would really make it great!


5: Introduction

In my opinion, the introduction is one of the most important aspects of a guide. In an introduction, you really want to reel them in, get them interested in what your saying from the very start. If you don’t, there’s a high chance they might just skip over it and call it a day.


Anyways that’s all I have to say about this.

Obviously you do not have to listen to a word I say, this is just my opinion rela.

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Thanks For The Tips!

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This is pretty good, but it looks more a desert biome than a mountain one. 3D terrain would be nice.

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Even if someone doesn’t have the season ticket, if you go game settings and make the game background cracked desert, you can use it as background terrain without having the season pass

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Would this go in Art with the art-guide tag? Probably not, but tbh I’m not sure.

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Yes it would go in Art with the art-guide tag

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