I am creating some dialogue and need help, is this good?
P = Player
H = Host
P: Wh- Where am I?
H: WELCOME! You’re on my 5,432-story Skyscraper!
H: I’ve invited you and your friends to “ISLAND SURVIVAL”
P: W- What’s that?
H: It’s my Reality Show, Of course.
P: H- How did I get here?
H: I’m not at liberty to tell you that.
P: H- Huh?
H: I. CANT. GIVE. YOU. THAT. INFO.
P: Why?
H: Because.
P: Why?
H: BECAUSE.
P: WHY?!?!?!!?
H: I HATE YOU!
P: That’s Not Very Nice…
P: * SOB*
H: WAIT! Please don’t cry. I’m Sorry!
P: You Are?
H: Yes! Just don’t cry.
H: Please…
P: I’ll Stop Crying Sniff
H: You Will?
P: IF YOU TELL ME HOW I GOT HERE!
H: …
H: Ok, Lets See…
H: I Hit you with a car, kidnapped you to make up for it, and cracked your bones back in place to heal you.
P: … WHAT?!!?!?!?!
P * Whispers to self*
P: i n whisper (GOD HECK NO)
H: There’s A prize at the end of the show…
P: Go on…
H: That’s all there is to it just try and survive.
H: Go into the helicopter.
P: YES SIR!
6 Likes
WOW that’s awesome! Just remember that 6 year olds have to read it.
4 Likes
Dont worry, there isnt much bad stuff, just lots of sybols
3 Likes
Haiasi
January 18, 2024, 11:48pm
6
noice
5 Likes
leahciM
January 18, 2024, 11:49pm
7
I think this is pretty good
still, I think you should change it just a bit just just in case your account gets banned.
He was hit by a car and got amnesia! How would you talk?
2 Likes
I would remove this, I wouldn’t want to risk my game being taken down for this
That was what i was aiming for
Do you need help creating the dialogue your did you just want to know if it was good?
Well i need help with part two. After part one I need dialogue for one your in the heli
Pardon? You need help with the dialogue after you get into helicopter?
yes, Your on a game show and the Host is talking to you about it and stuff
Um… ok i guess pretty weird and quirky…