A diner that I made for my new game: "the Veil" (Name not 100% decided)

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Okay, all right! And thanks for liking my ideas!

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The Murd3r Of Christina?
Too Dark?

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I like that it’s kinda cryptic and doesn’t elaborate on how she passed lol.

Especially considering how she was inadvertently murd*red.

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wait, so if I’m not mistaken, this is a… horror-ish game? correct me if I’m wrong.

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Yes. It’s not actually horror, of course.

But the setting and lore within the game make it that way, yes.

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it could be named “PROJECT VEIL” or something like that. I could also help with a thumbnail if needed.

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Just wondering, if we could do a collab if necessary…

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I’ll make a post about a thumbnail pretty soon. I’ll be sure to tag you in it as a reminder.

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Collab for a future project?

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I can start working on it now. I have nothing to do lol. :sweat_smile:

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For this project or maybe a future project if you would like?

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Here is a slghtly darker list of names!
Old Ones:
Lifting The Veil
Why The Vines Grow
The Quest Of Annalise The Alternate
New Ones:

  1. Through the Shrouded Veil
  2. Lifting the Veil of Shadows
  3. Annalise and the Sinister Realm
  4. Breaking the Forbidden Veil
  5. Why the Vines Entangle
  6. The Murd3r of Christina in the Dark
  7. The Grim Quest of Annalise the Alternate
  8. The Whispering Veil
  9. Veil of the Damned
  10. Annalise and the Cursed World
  11. Shattering the Veil
  12. Where the Vines Conceal
  13. The Haunting of Christina
  14. Annalise and the Malevolent Parallel
  15. Beneath the Dark Veil
  16. Unveiling the Abyss
  17. Annalise and the Shadowed Expanse
  18. Piercing the Gloom
  19. The Vines of Despair
  20. The Vanishing of Christina
  21. Annalise’s Perilous Odyssey

These titles aim to evoke a sense of mystery, danger, and the unknown.

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Maybe the name could also be Diner Dash too…

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That’s a really cool idea! If you need help deciding the game name I can help!

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wait, so just clarifying, what’s the name of the gaem?
my Grammar -_-

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Actually I don’t have any idea’s either ;-;

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woah!
i think the diner looks great! i love all the little details

suggestion:
maybe add a gim or a sentry working as a waiter there? you could even add some ordering food too.

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Maybe at the beginning there are like messes everywhere and lil plants coming out and later in the game you upgrade the place so that icky stuff isn’t there anymore

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Its kinda more like medieval in my opinion :33

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even though showcases are not allowed cough cough you still can agree it’s amazingly amazing, more amazing-er than amazing constellations. (i don’t wanna go off-topic)

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