A diner that I made for my new game: "the Veil" (Name not 100% decided)

The first variation is the original version that I posted about.

This is the improved one:

People that suggested improvements:
Potted plants and objects on the counter: @TheCentaursHoof
Potion/Chemical bottles: @Unit_72
Pancake emoji: @Queen.of.Learning

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That design is impeccable! I love it!

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Thanks :hearts:! I spent all night yesterday coming up with the design.

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Love all the work you put into it!

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Great! Without a doubt wonderful-er than wonderful!

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lol, wondering how wonderful this wonderland of wonderful wonders is? It’s wonderously wonderful!

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I mean, it s quite miraculous, miraculously a miraculous miracle of the miraculous!
(Fake like, I ran out)

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@Raycat2011, why didn’t you decide to change the name?

Name needed for my new series of Gimkit maps

Name needed for my new series of Gimkit maps

The original name was “the Veil”, but I don’t quite like the name.

It’s a series of exploration maps.

Fine, deleted…

LORE:
There was a scientist named Barbara Fletcher, and she was doing research on distant parallel universes that were close to our universe within the Mandelbrot. One day, her and her colleague, Brooklynn Miller, created a cross-plane portal (A “Gate”). Leaving Brooklynn to study the body of the portal, Barbara took 2 field researchers with her to the inside of the portal. It was a twisted and run-down version of our earth. Naming it “the Veil”, Barbara and her field researchers mysteriously went missing inside it.
The head of the lab seeked a way to get rid the Gate, to stop radiation. Brooklynn, still wanting to research it, took a small sample of the it, before torching the Gate. She took the sample, hid it time caspule-style in the outskirts of Amarillo, Texas (A real town in the US). A young girl named Christina found the caspule containing the Gate Sample. She put it back, of course- but the radiation leaked through the glass, into Christina’s body.
Many years later, she was married in a small town in eastern Louisiana. She “disappeared” in her and her husband(Lewis Redd)'s bathroom. Several weeks later, Lewis noticed there were strange-looking vines in the restroom. Choosing to ignore it, and use the guest bathroom instead, he dismissed it as the house being old.
Lewis had to go on a business trip, so he asked the daughter(Annalise WIlliams- the person the player plays as) of his good friend to look after the house while he was gone.
Annalise, being nosy despite being asked not to enter the master bathroom, did it anyways. In which the radiation was so crazy that it was a Gate in of itself.
Annalise (The player) explores the Veil version of her town, seeking a way back home.

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Because it contains unaliving- which is against community guidelines.

Please delete the post.

I love that diner design! But, can I add a suggestion to the name, please?

Of course you can. It’d be appreciated.

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A-MA-ZING!!!

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I’d need more information on the game, first. Unless I JUST SO HAPPEN to have the lore…

The Oddesy of Annalise?

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@Raycat2011 Here is my names’ suggestions for this game:
Diner Dash Delights
Bistro Bustle
Cafe Expedition
Cafe Crusade

Through The Veil?
Lifting The Veil
Annalise And The Alternate World
Breaking The Veil
Why The Vines Grow
and lastly,
The Quest Of Annalise The Alternate

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Sorry, I absolutely adore these names, but it’s more an overall darker exploration game. :frowning:
But I do love the names you suggested.

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Okay, all right! And thanks for liking my ideas!

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The Murd3r Of Christina?
Too Dark?

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I like that it’s kinda cryptic and doesn’t elaborate on how she passed lol.

Especially considering how she was inadvertently murd*red.