I don’t think polls are allowed asking what game type you should make. It’d be safer to do this on the wix.
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polls are allowed. But I have a better question Would you like lore to your story?
Edit: I’ll work on it later but I have my idea
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Sure, but it might be a bit hard to implement it in both games…
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Which wix?
(i’m only in the code sharing)
The groupchat should work if you really want an opinion on the latter. Just a tip though that most people aren’t really on at this time.
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yeah like most people said already polls arent allowed for voteing on what game you sould make your game based on what type game you make. polls mostly use for guides to know if their guide is helpful or not. (at least form what I’ve seen)
but heres the link to the wix some really cool and helpful people will happily help you out with this there wix link
oh ok thanks for leting me know
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By using the math of both games I have created something new.
Presenting
Underwater among us
Lore
In the year of 2018 a massive time of greatness had emerged. A time of Skeld. Skeld is a project that was created for the purpose of making people learn how to cooperate with other people the original project had unfortunately not worked. The scientists decide they could make it into a video game, creating space explorers. It was a dark game though. The game was only play-able in VR and people reported friends going missing and never found. You are one of those missing people.
The year is now 2026
You find yourself waking up to be in a room. The room was dark and you could not see much far ahead. You walk forward as you try to remember what happened. You remember the day before playing space explorers. Next thing you knew, you were no longer in your house. You hear a voice coming from the roof.
“You are now apart of the project. You will play the game together and figure out who the thief is.”
The man stopped talking and the room lit up. That’s when you realized you are in Skeld. You recall a news report from a few years back about Skeld’s unsuccessfulness (Big word moment) wasn’t because the mission didn’t succeed but rather the ship was stolen. You see a window and look out. You are underwater. While you were thinking you seem to teleport to the middle of the room.
“What’s happening?” You asked. The person beside you seemed to have a gadget but was hiding it.
“Sounds like we need to get the imposter out before they find us.” You notice that there are buttons in front of you. You click the green one, not knowing what it did. When you did a voice appeared overhead.
“One vote to green player.” So it was a voting thing. The guy nexts to you also hit the green button.
“Two votes for green player.” You look in the middle of the table where you saw a timer.
“5, 4, 3, 2, 1. 5 votes for green player.”
You see the floor open up under a kid. You noticed he had a green sticker. The kid fell through the floor where he splashed in the water. Sharks appeared and ate the kid. You stared in shock. You then see a hologram appear over the table. The women spoke again.
“Green was ejected. Green was not the imposter.”
You were scared about what that meant but you didn’t have long to think as the man spoke again.
“And now Let the games begin.”
Thank you thank you I know Its amazing @King_Thunder_Alt1 I would love to Collab with you one day but we need to figure a way to. For now here is what I got. Good luck
This is true. Although they are not well not allowed they are not usually used for game deciding
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Me and some other people are making an among us map, and I’m thinking of making some guides after it’s done. So if you want to make an among us map, ask for help and I might be able to help you.
YAAAAAY!!! UNDERWATER MAP!!! ADD BIG SCAWY FISH
The Topic is already off topic so what harm am I even doing :}
My bad cat :b
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the harm you are doing is adding EVEN MORE clutter and off-topicness
@Heliolatry sure ig
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How do u delete a post
Among us would be fun to recreate
But we love seeing new creative games, just search up among us on discovery!
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Ok, will write a bit of lore, just a few critiques on your own first, from start to finish:
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Needs a transition between these two clauses, also, try not to use short sentences unless for dramatic effect, and even then, use them sparingly to emphasize the desired point. Playable is one word, no hyphen needed.
Incorrect grammar, an alternative would be “The room was pitch black, a metallic chamber in which your frantic breaths echoed off the walls, your vision impaired to barely an arm’s length in front of you.” Unsuccessful ness can easily be shortened to fa!lure, if you feel the need for length, say catastrophic fa!lure to emphasize the negativity. Put a comma after “While you were thinking”. “You” doesn’t need to be capitalized after the “What’s happening?” dialogue. “Let” also shouldn’t be capitalized in the final sentence.
Have to leave for an event, expect a post in 2 to 3 hours after I get back.
@Heliolatry would be much appreciated thank you, now time to write.
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And how is that relevant to the original topic?
The original had other words I just didn’t want to bypass
I love the use of details. Tbh I’m in class when I write most of these so I’m not really paying attention Let me try again.
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FAX TO: VORTEX DEPARTMENT OF PUBLIC AFFAIRS, CENSORSHIP DIVISION
SENDER: VORTEX JUSTICE DEPARTMENT
Hidden Depths: A Commentary on the Ruthlessness of Gim Survival Tactics
The following is the testimony of one Dr Synapse, currently on trial for unethical experimentation after Vortex forces raided his laboratory within Echo territory. You are to create an edited version of this document that will be released for public consumption after elimination of phrases not in line with factional doctrine.
“You fools can preen about morality and consent all you want, in the end my work gave groundbreaking psychological insight into the survival drives of Gimkind when placed into situations involving lethal harm. By harnessing these findings, we can begin to isolate the genetic differences between the various subjects to find and manipulate the genome to achieve the perfect soldier, one who if produced en masse, could finally end this civil war. For all you accuse me of, don’t pretend your hands are any cleaner than my own. Remind me, who was it that developed the bioweapon Chemical X? In any event, my words mean nothing, for I know this trial to be a sham to assuage the public that justice was served. Very well. If this is to be my final oratory before my oofecution, I suppose I should give a proper summary of my mission.”
(Accused launches into a lengthy speech too long to retain public attention. For your convenience, it has been summarized to the following:)
Captured Vortex POWs were wiped of their memories and inserted into an underwater facility to provide a sense of isolation, with their mind subconsciously retaining the knowledge of how to eliminate perceived threats through force. Subjects were covertly surveilled through hidden cameras and microphones. The facility was well stocked, with a self sustaining yet outage prone geothermal power system as secondary electrical power, a nuclear plant requiring two subjects to operate, a turret in event of a leviathan class predator approaching the facility, a cafeteria serving fresh penguins, and a medical center capable of treating paper cuts and nothing more. In the center of the cafeteria lay an inscription, the subjects only knowledge of outside influence, reading as follows:
“In seven days, an extraction team will unlock the dock at the southern storage bay. At this time you may leave, but only if the team deems it safe to allow you to embark. For there is one among you who has retained their memories and is only capable of leaving if all other Subjects are…terminated. For funsies, we gave em a machete and a revolver. They must be found and ejected through the airlock in the oxygen harvesting room in the eastern end of the complex. This may be achieved by placing anonymous votes against a Subject at the end of each day, at which point you will be tranquilized and returned to the cafeteria. Should a Subject require an accelerated voting timeline, they may request an instant voting session at any point during the experiment. This shall also occur should there be a need to dispose of a discovered corpse. You will not be informed of the imposter’s elimination. You may now begin.”
The eight Subjects split off to explore the facility, and complete tasks to maintain thee facility’s integrity, as the water pressure at these depths wreaked havoc on the hull integrity and thus minor systems like garbage disposal and door wiring were forced to be manually repaired. Subject 3 discovered Subject 6 decapitated behind the facility’s central map room and began a meeting. Subjects 2 and 4 had paired off to fire at coral outcrops for fun in the northeast, Subject 1 claimed to have been disposing of trash in the storage bay, Subjects 7 and 8 were monitoring the western public access surveillance system, and Subject 5 said they were preforming a rod realignment in the reactor core. With inconclusive data, no Subjects were ejected, and the tranquilizers initiated the second day after an 8 hour sleep cycle. Subjects 1, 2, 5, and 7 believed safety lay in numbers and went to check out the ejection chamber in the oxygen procurement wing. Subjects 3 and 4 went towards the medical bay, only for a power outage to occur. All Subjects became disoriented and lost each other, save for 2 and 7 sticking together. Upon restoration, Subject 8’s body was discovered slumped over the chair of the surveillance office, a hole oozing blood from the back of their head. Upon gathering in the cafeteria, the only suspects were 1, 3, 4, and 5, who all had rushed to electrical, with 5 being last, coming in from the west just after 3 entered from east. WIth 5 being closer to the body they were chosen to be ejected. Observing his body’s ascent into the barren sand swept landscape, they saw a strange red creature with 4 arms on its head dart towards 5, letting out a bellowing roar as it swallowed them whole. Nothing of note occurred on Day 3, save for a strange series of door malfunctions that nearly separated 2 and 3 from 1, 4, and 7. With no further evidence, the vote was skipped, though one voter placed a vote on 3, who took great offense. On Day 4, the reactor began to meltdown, with 1 and 7 getting trapped by doors above medbay, while 2, 3, and 4 went south. 2 made it to the reactor chamber, but was separated from 3 and 4 near the southwestern hydroturbine by a door. 1 and 7 entered the chamber to find 2’s body roasting against the rods, his legs jammed into gaps. Using the dual override to end the meltdown, they noticed a vent ajar in the floor just before they called a meeting, and demanded to know where 3 and 4 had been. 3 had went back north to allegedly try to find 2 and 7, while 4 waited by the door for 2. The issue was that the map of the ventilation ducts showed multiple entry points to the reactor, as 3 could have went through electrical to security, or 4 could have just used the lower turbine access hatch directly to 2 in reactor. Due to this proximity, 4 was voted out into the maws of the leviathan. Day 5 once more passed without incident, 1 and 7 warily avoiding 3 in case they were the imposter hadn’t been 4 after all. Come Day 6 however, they would find it mattered not that they stuck together, for only one needed to oof. A malfunction in the oxygen intake caused all three to rush to the chamber, but as 1 readied to disarm it, they watched in horror as 3 shoved 7 into the ejection chamber and launched him into the oceanic abyss. Once more the terrifying cry of the reaper ripped through the water, echoing into the facility…wait into the facility? Once 7 was ejected, the external seal jammed, causing the Reaper to catch 3 and 1’s scent, its recent meal sending it into a hunting frenzy. Tearing open the tube, it caused an emergency distress signal to be released, and the tremors cause by it mauling of the hull redamaged the fragile reactor. As 1 and 3 fled in tandem from the cries of the reaper and the rising flood of water, they sprinted for the storage bay and the hoped rescue team. Once there, 3 slammed 1 against the wall, yanking open the garbage chute and pinning their head in the gap. WIth their victim in position, they began to lower the panel, restraining 1’s thrashing legs until the metal finally crunched against the brittle malnourished bones of 1’s neck. The evac team did successfully extract 3 by utilizing a Cyclops class submersible with the intent of using their new passenger for further testing, but upon surfacing to contact Synapse’s boat, they were captured by a Vortex patrol that had caught the facility’s distress signal. The research Synapse conducted earned him the oofing penalty, and has now been co-opted by the Vortex R&D Division (Should this be disclosed, you will be fed to the reaper).
Report concludes.
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Probably could have put paragraph spacing on a day by day basis for ease of reading, but its fine. So @Cvefy , what do you think?
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