Hello gimkitters! me and a friend re working on a dystopian-ish
description:
Classified mission
A futuristic era where the player accidently gets shot down by aliens, you gotta find a way to escape, or fight your way through!
Kayden
We also need ideas for sections <3
love u guys and I’m excited to see what you come up with!
Make a seperate post for thumbnails in Art Please!
Okay, so.. What kind of ideas you looking for? Mechanics? Lore? Gameplay?
all of the above, we’ll take anything, also thx for letting me know!
I’ll start on the lore, do you have any extra details you wanna tell me before I start?
Nope, good luck and TYSM!
Oh, and are there any main characters? That way I can add more accurate dialogue.
Hey, just my own two cents, if a post seems like a purely conceptual thing with not much work actually put into the game yet, take creative liberties with aspects of the lore like character names and such, they likely won’t have a detailed background for the character, so you just give yourself more room to work with. Not to say that OP’s character ideas are always bad, so long as they have some effort put in on their end, like Char’s thing from September (still haven’t finished that lol). Anyhow, will write something for this tomorrow, good luck with your essay Phoenix!
In the distant cybernetic future, humanity has stretched its technology to reach the stars.
Humans have explored and made their homes on distant planets beyond the galaxy. Nova Carter, an extremely skilled operative is tasked with the mission of transporting confidential intel to Earth. Suddenly her ship is hit with a Suprise attack, an ambush, her ship is then shot down by Unknown Alien Forces.
Nova awakens. Then, the AI helper known as “ECHO” (Embedded Cognotive Holographic Operator) starts crackling to life. Buffering Status: Critically damaged. Environment: Hostile. “Nova, do you copy?” Echo Says. *Winces as a large pole is on her leg, she slowly takes it off. She then scans the burning landscape throughout all the fog and gas. “I’m here ECHO, where are we?” Nova Says.
I cannot track our exact coordinates at this moment. starts scanning for threats WARNING. WARNING “ECHO Says”. Several Unknown lifeforms detected. *Through the smoke, Alien Patrols appear, led by Commander Velyx of Sarnix Dominion, a voice starts booming over conveniently placed loudspeakers. Puny Human! Surrender your cargo! If you resist, it will result in immediate annihilation! Commander Velyx says.
Nova starts to grab her High-Tech Blaster. “Not Happening Velyx! ECHO, any way out?” Nova Says. “I sense a faint beacon nearby, if you reach it, the probability of extraction goes from 36% to 67%” ECHO says. Nova then darts into the shadows with lightning speed, dodging rounds of enemy fire. Along the way, she finds a battered, beat up, CommLink that starts to crackle with a familier voice.
“Nova, this is Drake. We are currently tracking your signal. We’ll try our best to guide you out.” Lt. Mason Drake Says. “It’s good to hear your voice Drake. But, I’m not leaving without that Intel! Tell Sierra Holt to prep the extraction plan!” Nova Says. Nova sneaks deeper into the shadowy halls of the alien facility, she overhears Commander Velyx contacting his second-in-command, Zyra Thal.
“This human is more resourceful than we thought, shall I increase alien patrols?” Zyra Says.
“Let her come to us, she will lead us to the others” Commander Velyx says *He then cackles Maniaclly then chokes on his own Alien Chip" Nova Progresses forward going through an Alien Jungle, the branches claw at her arms, the cold wind wrapping around her body.
“ECHO, scan for any signs of other human life on this planet” Nova Says. ECHO’s voice responds. “SCANNING. SCANNING. Human race detected, 20 miles from our current location.” ECHO states. Dr. Lana’s Beacon. “If Lana is alive, she can boost our signal!” Nova Exclaims. Suddenly, a large plasma beam explodes the ground near Nova’s feet knocking her into a rock
“You Cannot run forever human! Surrender and Commander may have mercy!” Zyra Thal Shouts. Nova activates her beaten up comms “Drake! I’ve got company! I need a distraction, ASAP.” Nova says. “Copy that! Distractions Incoming. Okay, we’ve hacked the aliens control systems, you got a 30 second window!” The aliens giant robot starts doing some funky moves Sierra Holt’s voice comes through the second convenient loudspeaker. “Feed me the control paterns, ECHO. Lets light up the map!” Sierra says.
As the Alien Patrols scratch their heads in confusion as they see the “Boogying” robot, Nova dashes towards the beacon to find Dr. Lana, wounded but alive. “Nova.. You made it.. I can amplify the S0S beacon, but I’ll need some cover.” Dr. Lana says weakly. Nova then readies her High-Tech blaster, “No one’s getting through me! Lets do it Lana!” She says confidently.
Commander Velyx hologram shimmers into view “Who’s a good boy? You are!” Velyx says to his Alien dog. “Sir, your live” A random worker says. “Oh! Well uh, Persistant? Aren’t you? This world is your coffin, Carter.” Commander Velyx says angerly. “We’ll see who gets barried Velyx!” Nova shouts. With the signals boosted, the engines roar in hope. Nova prepares to fight, a final stand. ECHO, then chimes in with an alert: “DANGER! DANGER! Heavy forces inbound. Retreat or Defensive Retaliation.” Echo Alerts.
Nova gripped her gadget, preparing for whatever comes next. “Drake, Lana, Sierra–this is it. Let’s bring everyone home!” Nova says with confidence.
The struggle for survival, trusting your allies, along with the looming threat of the dangerous Sarnix Dominion Drive Nova’s mission forward, it provides hope for her and her friends. The worlds fate not only remains on Nova, but the strength of the team that she leads.
Finally done, let me know if I should change anything. Also, let me know if anyone has any suggestions for my Lore-Making.
Don’t ask about the names, I came up with them quickly.
That’s SO GOOD 
Just to clarify the Lore is a little more simple, and it kind of takes on a spot in the back burner for the action it’s more of an undertone but so far the basic story is you get shot down by aliens and then you go into your ship and you try to escape you meet this like AI hologram assistant guy named gim “not to say yours aren’t good these are awesome we are just looking for something a little more simple
I spent 1 and a half hours brainstorming and typing it out for nothing? JkJk.
I had fun making it. It’s fine if you revise it to something more simple.
I don’t use AI for my lores, lol.
Thx.
Mini-Mods are better than none
I felt so bad for a minute there
ty <3
This is a bit off-topic… (There are flag spammers who flag these posts, and they would flag this…) You should probably delete the post before someone flags it…
Also, yes, some of the forumers are very very VERY skilled in lore… (I don’t exactly have the patience to write that much unless I’m bored…)
Yay, I’m sounding like a moderator again, how great.
I guess so… (It would be better if the current moderators were more active on the forums…)
Ur all good man, everyone on these forums are super nice so far, ty! (to keep this on topic anyone else making one, if so need any more info I’m up 2 it and screenshots coming soon (:
What’s the point of screenshots? Do you need ideas on what to put here or what you can add to make it look better?
just to give more detail to the game/inspire ideas
Do you need any more help?
Simpler what?
Gotchya!
yep lol looking for somethind a bit simpler, we do have more lore now (:
Simpler lore, as it is a bit more of an undertone for those who look for it, its not a main gameplay element
more simple?
IM SO TIREDDDD.
I’ll try to if I ever wake up
