I’m not very good at making lore, so I was wondering if someone could help! So in the game, you’re in a prison for doing some crimes (I don’t really know what crime), and there’s a talking spider who helps you find gadgets to escape. After he helps you escape, he gets mad since you tried to leave him behind, then there’s a boss fight. In the end, you apologize, then the game ends. Any lore ideas would be appreciated!
Your in prison because you used to be an exterminator but during a job you realized that you were ruining the lives of the insects so instead of exterminating a spider nest you exterminate your client.
Also why is the ending so anticlimactic? You just apologize?
I ran out of ideas for the ending but there’s multiple endings you can get
what other endings do you have?
I have about 11, but most of them are jokes. I would say the only two other ending that could be real is where you oof the spider, or he oofs you
Hm, why not make an ending where you just bring the spider?
may I help with a crime ideas/ending ideas? if you still need endings/a cirme that the player committed
Honestly, any ideas would be great
alr time to lock in then- you and your friend(who doesnt actually like you) where walking together on day when out of no where the cops came and arrested you for commiting 36 counts of tax evasion and 20 of counts arson.( the player was framed) you try to prove your innocents but the cops just yeet you into a cell and leave thats when you hear a psst noise and thats when you meet (inset spiders name) they said that they would help you escape and take revenge on the one who framed you. ( this is just a base lore idea)
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Sounds pretty good. Was it the friend who framed us since he doesn’t like us?
Lore I might try this one…
You were always a good person. The type of person who works their life out and enjoys retirement. The person who obeys life rules. No family, except your parents. You had some friends. Not very close though. Your parents were in a retirement home.
Then on a regular Wednesday morning you get a phone call. The type that makes you on edge. It was from an unknown number.
“Hello, your brother has been captured. Give us 2 million dollars and we will give him back” The caller said. It was robotic, AI voice.
"I don’t have a brother, I’m sorry, wrong number."You choke out, scared for your life. Who knows what they will do to that poor soul.
There was some murmuring in the background. For a couple of seconds you seemed stress-free.
“Talk to your parents. Check your genetics history, somewhere. You’re related, somehow. I will call you in 2 hours. Don’t go to the police. Unfortunately your biological brother’s head will be slit off.”
The call ended.
You immediately called your parents about this. They told the truth. Yes, you had a sibling. But they couldn’t afford 2 kids at the time so they gave him too Social Services.
Instead of paying the money you go to the place where they called. Dressed up like they look.
Fool.
You then start to walk inside, like you’re a regular person.
But the place was already swarming with cops and they caught you. They were found a couple minutes before by the police.
You get taken in jail, a maximum security prison.
The only thing alive there is some rodents. And the occasional guard who checks on you every hour or so.
While you sit on the bed a blue spider appears with a pair of keys on him. Your eyes widen.
"Hello,"The tiny voice said. You gasp. You think that you are delusional.
"Hello, how do you speak"You whisper back.
"Yah, I talk. You know about the Nuclear Facility next door, right?"You shake your head in reply saying that you do.
“Well they were doing some type of mutations and I was actually a person and they mixed us together with a blue jay.” The spider replied, shocking the Player.
"My name is [insert spider name]. Here are the keys. "The spider walked up and gave the keys.
They soon escaped with the help of the spider who knew the secret backdoor entrance.
The spider then realized that he wants to help more people escape.
But you get too attached to the spider and beg for him to stay. The spider says no.
You then live by yourself and meet your biological brother. Maybe some things were meant to be.
yes it was they wanted the player gone so they can steal the players job/rank (I had to use all my -2 brain cells for this lore idea) np gald I could try and help ya out 
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hmmm ok I might use a mix of these ideas, thanks everyone!
I’ll be glad to you shouldn’t solve this because it might close before everyone gets a chance
Huh? What do you mean?
I mean some people do not have enough time to finish it during school please unmark a solution to give other More advance lore creators like @King_Thunder_Alt1 or @Cvefy a chance to have time to write a detailed Lore for you
Oh yeah, makes sense
Introducing BETRAYAL OF SPIDERS
Here goes something.
Lore
This story begins where all stories begin. If all stories being in prison. If not that’s ok because this is where you begin. You were having a totally normal day, chatting with friends, playing games, watching YouTube, stuff like that. Then they appeared. The police barged into your house and took you here. Your crime? Not being subscribed to GimKit.
You were quickly thrown in a cell and told that your crime is worth up to 5 years. You knew that was not good for you but decided that you would have to deal with it until someone bailed you out. As you sit in the corner you, observe the cell. It was an average cell, on you might see on TV. The roof was low, just high enough that you didn’t hit your head. The bathroom directly in front of your bed, no way you were sleeping with that smell. The beds were hard, like as if they were made of solid rock. You stand up as the prison guard walks by.
“Court yard in 10 minutes!” He yells out in the hallway. You couldn’t wait to move in a bigger area. It might be the only form of freedom you can experience here. The guard walks pass your cell and when he does you notice a glimmer on his belt. Must be the key, you thought as he continued walking by. The bell for court yard rings and your cell door opens.
“Everyone Out!” Your hour starts now!" Being new here, you just decide to follow another prisoner out. The guy was your height but he looked as if he couldn’t do anything wrong. You poke him on the shoulder. To your surprise he turns around and acts calmly.
“What do you want, rookie?”
“Sorry I just wanted to know what you did to get in here.”
“Oh well, I’m GimBob and I was jaywalking for the fourth time.”
What Jay-walking, you thought, is that even a punishable crime for prison sentences.
Either way it didn’t matter because he ran off as soon as you got to the courtyard. You decided that you wanted to play basketball, so you go to the court.
“Mine if I play?” You ask real nicely.
"Yeah get lost kid, The grown ups are playing. Looks like basketball isn’t an option. You decide to just go for a walk. The track was clear, no one would tell you to go away there. You start walking on the track and you see a spider crawling on the ground next to you.
“Hey kid, you want out I think I could help.”
“What!? Huh? Who said that!?”
“Down here buddy.”
“Oh wait your a spider.”
“Is that a problem?”
“No, but spiders don’t talk.”
“Yeah well I do. I’ll meet you at your cell tonight.” And with that the spider crawled into the grass. The rest of courtyard was kinda bland. You just walked for the next hour waiting to go back inside. The guard finally called you inside and you followed tired. The guard called lights out and everyone instantly went to sleep, like clock work. The guy in the cell next to you starts snoring. You wait for the spider to find you.
“Hey kid I’m here.”
“Okay so what’s the plan?” You ask.
“We leaving right now.”
“What already!?”
“Just follow me”
The spider goes near the vent, and starts to move it. The vent fell off and you climbed in. The spider went on ahead and you followed close behind. You went up as the vents shifted and contourted. The musty dust in the vents made it hard to breath but you pushed forward. You see the holes of another vent and the floor opened below the spider. You watch in horror as the spider hangs on.
“KID HELP MEE!” The spiders squeaky voice echoed down the hall. You started at him questioningly. He did get you this far but he is just a spider. The decision is yours. Will you help him will you not.
And this dear reader is where your story truly begins. Hanging above a vent.
I’m on a time crunch so this is the best I can offer for now. I hope you enjoy!
Appreciate the support, but I have no interest in this topic. @Skigma ,feel free to close whenever.
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