I would like some feedback

so yeah I am making a dungeon crawler called dungeons of murlac so quick recap of story king sends you to stop monster invasion but when you get to the core of the horde the king reveals he is the bad guy sends you back into a prison you come back and defeat him and there is a side quest where you save a mothers little boy I will make more side quests but should I add something else

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Perhaps some Easter eggs? maybe a badge system? Epilogue? prologue?

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i like this idea a lot! you could add many ending based on choices through the game or an auto generated game each time

I like this idea thanks a lot

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@supa_gim please press the solution mark for the best answer that was asked, Thank you

how big do you think the map is? In my games, I make secret area. have you tried that?

Maybe some reward room for doing something like beat the map for the first time.

The topic was just made today, it is okay if he doesn’t find it.

i like yuor idea and @Ayden1 s idea

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might I say Im going to keep it open until I get enough k

Thanks, I appreciate that. Hope I can find your map so I can try it!

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Also, maybe you could add a concept room, so people can see what would have been in the game but either didn’t work or wasn’t needed.

cool and thanks for the feedback

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multiple endings maybe,good,bad,joke ending,joined him ending,ect?

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Narrator ending:You stumble across a script of paper in a hidden area that shows someone has been controlling your actions. The next line reads:
“Stanley reflects on the meaning of free will then looks up as he finishes reading his fate.
Stanley was crushed by a falling anvil.”

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That’s a good idea. Another one could be a mid ending where you defeat the king but still d!e after

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Have the player choose the follow what the narrator says or not for 2 different endings

bro its not a ending game its a dungeon game

It can be both. @supa_gim

He can do what he wants to do. He just is looking for feedback.