the story currently is: some Halloween dudes had done bad and mean things to some Christmas dudes so Santa marry green and the mounten are trying to find people to attack the hallos but the other are hiding away because they dont like war I don’t really know it makes no sense but I need something before Dec 3
Make some sort of plot twist, Like Santa is a bad guy or one of the Christmas dudes are
If Im understanding this correctly
yeah me and my friend were working on that but then we forgot about it and I’ve just continued soooooooooooo
so what u want is just basically lore am I right?
kinda I know how to implement the lore of what happened but I don’t want to do that with out consulting my friend because he made the starting stuff
Have you already started working on the map?
yes the map is finished till December
yea lore is literally the story of ur game so to kinda avoid confusion I suggest u change the title to I need lore for my game or smth. but its just a suggestion
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also if ur game is 60% done I suggest u to not change the lore by a lot cuz u might have to redo the whole game
its really only the map that I care about changing but its really only 25% done
then ur probably fine since its not gonna be a lot of work redoing the things
i will try to come up with smth later but i used up all my braincells
Yeah just as @Techn0blade said you should change the title of the topic so people who mainly focus on writing lore can help you
I’m I aloud to send a link or the name of my map here I didn’t look that deep in the rules
edit: I literally cant find the rules
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I don’t think so I think ur only allowed to send map links in a gimkit award
Yeah sending links are not okay because its considered “advertising” your map, but you can say the name of your map that’s perfectly ok :D,
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I HAVE BEEN SUMMONED
Nightmares on Christmas
Having watched Mrs. Claus be slaughtered by Hauntis before his eyes, Santa holds no joy or mercy within his heart. Alongside Merry Green, he has filled his sleigh not with presents, but explosives, to be rained down upon the graveyards from which Hauntis draws his power. While the elves have no love for Hauntis, they also realize that Santa is not in his right mind, and resolve to defeat Hauntis while preventing Santa from irrevocably damaging his reputation.
After a basic tutorial, the player’s elf, leaves the workshop cubicles and enters the Sleigh Hangar, only to watch powerlessly as Santa takes off into the night, beginning his long journey to the desecration of the departed’s tombs. With the elf’s mission now timed (say 20 minutes), they mount Reinkle and rush off after Santa. While they succeed the Ghostly Graveyard ahead of Santa, they fall short of Hauntis’ Tomb. Trekking through the fog swept paths, they fend off the ghouls of the night that defend their leader, incapacitating a horde of Ozis, and dodging a swarm of Fuzzfoots in the tunnel system leading up the hill to the Tomb. Reaching the top, they engage Hauntis in battle and defeat him, the blast from his oofing illuminating the heavens above to show Santa coming into view over darkened clouds. Landing in front of you, he strikes in a fury, as he believes Hauntis should have been his to defeat. Though you attempt to reason with him, you are soon plunged into combat, where you knock him into a coma with a well timed snowball. Knowing that it will be some time before he recovers both physically and mentally, you don the suit and prepare to finish the prep for Christmas.
Ends on cliffhanger of particles reforming from the crypt as lightning strikes the ground reviving Hauntis, Santa is seen pounding against the glass in an isolation ward, and you take off to deliver a more traditional payload of joy.
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Name: A NOT CHRISTMAS CHRISTMAS STORY
The people go on a hunt to find them and when all of them are discombobulated, Santa drops evil elves (which have good gadgets) Then Santa comes and knock you guys down of the mountain, which leads to levels to climb back up the mountain to defeat Santa (Which they do) and after makes Christmas a worser day than Halloween, (I know “worser” isn’t a word so just pretend it is) Until Santa Jr. sends an avalanche you have to run away from and becomes a fossil. (AND THAT LEADS UP TO A SEQUEL OR 2ND CHAPTER WHEN YOUR CHILDREN GETS REVENGE AND USES THE FOSSIL FOR FUEL FOR CARS AND TO GET THEIR SOULS CALLED “KIDS’ REVENGE”) Also Santa discombobulates at the beginning due to a heart attack. The kids beat Santa Jr. and makes a holiday called New Years, thus making them in thee history books. They’re known to be a myth, but it really isn’t true one bit. The 3 and final chapter called “Nail and the Coffin” each of the controlled 3 holidays, one’s Halloween, second’s Thanksgiving, third New Year’s. But wait, WHAT ABOUT CHRISTMAS??? Well Christmas spirit, (Which powers everything in the North Pole), is gone and Christmas is no more… You play as an elf looking for jobs (sorry for no-no word) to get money, which works out and all of the elves get turned into MINIONS by a mysterious person… (This story takes place 1800’s-1950’s) AND THAT’S WHAT I CALL, “A NOT CHRISTMAS CHRISTMAS STORY”
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holy lord how long did this take you
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