I need LORE for my game (lots of it)

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Would you like to hear my idea for ‘the Experiments’? Sure!

Experiment 1: Drawn
Once a struggling painter, he was kidnapped at his shabby apartment whilst working on his latest painting. He was transformed into a piece of paper, able to sneak through the tiniest of crevices. That’s why he’s present in the vents.

Experiment 2: Times
Times was a man way behind of his time. That is, he liked old-fashioned items. His house looked like it had been plucked from the 1950’s. He was transformed into a giant hourglass, able to sho0t sand and teleport the souls of others back in time to j0in him. They are left without a will, and forced to serve Times until the end, of time!

Experiment 3: Nurse
Nurse was a f@iled experiment. She now wanders the halls, muttering to herself, ‘I’ve f@iled…I’ve f@iled…’ If you attempt to confront her, she will chase you, screaming ‘Leave me alone! LEAVE ME ALONE!’

Experiment 4: BOT-209
BOT-209 was Dr. Smithson’s first attempt at twisting the smart endlessly advancing AI mind. It didn’t end well…. It ended up more powerful than expected. It almost k!led Dr. Smithson. But he managed to gain control of it. Now it stands guard outside Dr. Smithson’s office. Armed with a legendary Zapper and with de@dly accuracy, it’s a force to be reckoned with.

Will continue later

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how would i make a save code, i am pretty advanced at making maps but i do not know how to use blocks yet, could you clarify?

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(post spontaneously combusted)

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Don’t worry, I also have no clue how the heck to do block code, I am a story and prop person, not so much devices beyond the most basic features. I understand things conceptually enough to be able to add them to my ideas, but not in practice.

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okay thank you!, I will leave this topic open for about one more day and then I will mark a solution and close it. so get your lore in!

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don’t mean to be rude but is this AI???

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Doesn’t look like it to me.

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ok @ars3nic just make sure

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Okay, here’s the rest of the Experiments

Experiment 5: Ooze
Ooze was what happened when someone accidentally spilled some GimGulp into some Chemical Supreme. The liquids turned black and bubbled. It also became sentient. Ooze will randomly show up as black puddles in the halls. If you step in them, you’ll start to dissolve, ending the game.

Experiment 6: N̵҉̾͟͞͡u̶͖̖͆̊̈́͡͡l̶҉̰͚͖͕̍̈́̅͗̏̇͢͜͜͝l̶҉̰͚͖͕̍̈́̅͗̏̇͢͜͜͝

H̶̪͍̒ͥ͑̓ę̷̵̧̖̫̗̆̊ḻ̸͈ͧ͑̓̓̀͡p̶̸̨̺͊̍̒̓̀ m̶̷͔ͪ̽͡ę̷̵̧̖̫̗̆̊, N̰̜͉͔ͬ̽͢û̶͙̽̿͆̈ḻ̸͈ͧ͑̓̓̀͡ḻ̸͈ͧ͑̓̓̀͡ i̵͓͙̱͚̎͟s̩͙͖̋͛͟ c̷̹͖͋́̃ȍ̸̢̢̮͚̐̚m̶̷͔ͪ̽͡i̵͓͙̱͚̎͟n̷̶̯͉̊̽̐ͦ͘g̴̶̛̮̣͙͠
(I put this creepy message to demonstrate Null. Basically, if you run into Null, you’ll be instantly oofed. He’s the most powerful experiment in-game.)

Experiment 7: No. 7
This experiment never got a name. It was a young child, struggling to fit in. It transformed into, well, it disn’t exactly transform. All No. 7 gained was a pair of glowing, bl0od red eyes. No. 7 actually hates it here. You can hear it crying in the halls sometimes. No. 7 wants to help you escape and be your ‘friend’. No. 7 will help you out of the hospital, and at the end of the game, it asks you to be its friend. If you say yes, you both be friends. If you say no, No. 7 summons Null to oof you. (Turns out, Null was No. 7’s pet dog when it was kidnapped and changed into Null. No. 7 became depressed after that. Sad story. :pensive_face:)

Also, @scottgimer, I didn’t use AI. I just had a free period to write this.

@King_Thunder_Alt1 liked my post? :astonished_face:

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…
why are you asking this, quoting the text (which pings the maker of that quote) when you used AI to create a thumbnail request… (don’t take this the wrong way, I’m just wondering.)

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hey @CommanderGOAT
can you add a bit more to your lore

(I know its already a lot but please)
I am making a game where a player needs to escape a hospital that is pretty much abandoned, and I need LORE ideas

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How could I add to it? Just wondering :slightly_smiling_face:.

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i really like it but could you add a little more backstory to the whole thing, i just think that it might be missing an element of spookiness

but its really good right now too, your lore is great and im not saying that it isnt

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poof the magic ghost has appeared (The last horror lore that I did hurt me, I gave the big bad, (the main character ) too much realism) Almost cried when they were corrupted but that is beyond the point time for more :smiling_face_with_tear:!

entry 1 Aug 14 year unknown they’ve kept us down here for who knows how many years, just to do what? Jot down some experiments that they did with kids? I don’t think so, down here in the lab there is nothing but gray walls and corridors, the last child that had the will to escape was gone. I am not an experiment. Anyways now its lunch and I am not going to starve while being trapped.
Entry 2 Aug 16 year unknown Today is my checking day, us scientists take shifts so one doesn’t go insane. First experiment, an alien creature that floats in her cell eyes closed, instead of trying to break her cell walls she just screams into your head, disturbing. Second experiment, A large fuzz ball paces in their cell sometimes licking the glass wall. Third experiment, a dark shadow moves silently and speaks into my mind, “Darkness Darkness is the only way the Gray Gray Gray of the walls haunt you.”
experiment 3412 (took us a while) A creature I don’t know how to explain it but I can see the child body suspended in the air claws drift by the floating child, both the child and the claws covered in black goop, a loud screech echos through the hall.
Entry 3 Sep 1 yea- does it matter now. Labor day, more experiments, more children. labor day is the day that my team makes experiments, not view them. The child struggles to escape finally the needle makes it in, the child goes limp, experiments start. First experiment: gone, Second experiment: alive Third: gone Fourth: alive…
The Fourth is the only living experiment of this batch named experiment 4389, the virus, my favorite. I try to talk to her every hour I can, she told me the year finally but the year is our little secret I can only tell you that it has been 25 years.
Entry - ----- I think I have gone crazy I mean the Gray has turned purple. The walls bend when I walk by. The experiments say keep me trapped. I think I am going mad, will they release us or are we the experiments? All of the scientists are hiding from me. Only one will approach me, what is happening what?.. I will continue for Mr. Dalk, experiment 9807 our first ever experiment on an [redacted] even though he was a scientist now he is something different I don’t know what back to you Experiment 9807… They speak lies, everything is fine my body is teal but beyond that I am fine
enty — ---- It has been 5 more years since, the paint has faded. I am a rust color my chassis is rust colored. I want to leave I have spoken with the others, I am their leader Experiment 1, pull the lever, It is time.-- — rkcrevzrag 9807: V jvyy frr lba ba gur bgure fvqr zl sevraq what follows is the words that experiment 9807 wrote
Rotating in the bottom floors
On your time
Turns out to be a waste of time
1 hour spent
3 minuets left
(In case you didn’t want to solve the sentences above they translate to ROT13 a cipher)

“Done :sweat_smile: I didn’t rap things up though that is your job”
“It is your job You found it”
"No I didn’t "
“fine go in detail about the next events”
“but they are redacted”
“don’t care, finish your job”
“fine”

Entry -----0—0 It watched me, I could feel it, watching. The experiment. The rebel, the turned one. No title could explain it, a robot. Cold metallic eyes watching. The lights went out, no more light only the dark grey of the corridors. I saw a pool of liquid sitting there on the floor, in the reflection I think there was a creature, standing right behind me. Every step I took it watched, when I turned around- nothing, then I looked forward… there it was cold lifeless eyes staring into my soul, it tilted its head. In my brain I heard a screeching but saw nothing a cold metallic hand reached towards me then–,
“happy?”
“very”
“am I done?”
“Yes”
“am I free to leave?”
“sure just watch your step, the lights are out after all”
“okay bye”
“bye”

V nz fgvyy jngpuvat .(Authors note: plz try to translate from rot13 post your translation also)

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A doctor’s note with some scribbled words:
“I’m going to leave. I finally figured it out! Not complete.. but a project.”
Spray-painted onto a wall:
“THY EXIT IS IN YOUR HEAD”
A computer still running from the 90’s:
“Take the vial under the desk. You’ll need it.”
And finally, carved onto a steel table (somehow):
“The exit is not here. You need to empty your head.”
When the player finds all of these, words pop up in their vision:
“YOUR EMOTIONS ARE PHYSICAL BEINGS”
And after that:
“TAKE THEM DOWN, OR DON’T, FOR YOUR DEMISE”
How’s this?

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I’ll give you lore if you give me lore first (Here). Just kidding, I have lore.

"A long time time ago in the town quiet town of gimtopia there was a mayor that wanted to change the town. He wanted the town to turn to a town that was known by every gim in the world.’

He hired workers to build huge sky scrapers that were taller than any gims could ever imagine. He built houses and schools and tons of other buildings. The town was starting to grow. The mayor’s dream had come true"

“As the town grew, there were more injuries. The nearest hospital was 450 miles away. Some gims couldn’t survive the wait. The mayor had an idea.”

“He hired the best workers to build a huge hospital. Everything was going well until one worker named dr.hexa saw the worst thing known in gim history: chemical supreme.”

“He ran to tell all of the workers about what he saw, but there was a problem: they were evil plants. He tried run the the door. It was blocked with chemical supreme. He checked all of the exits. All of them were blocked. He was in big, big trouble.”

He turned to hide in his office but it was too late. The evil plants the were once his best friends chained him to the wall. “goooood, we caught him” they hissed."

“Dr. Hexa studied them for a few days, until one day he figured out where the key was. He freed himself and checked the door. The chemical supreme there had d1ed.”

“He took a big sigh of relief and looked outside. The whole town was wrecked. He spent many days traveling to a new town. He started a new life and lived a happy life.”

You have to escape the hospital and find the town to live in.

Wow! That was a good, right? I wrote on an ipad. It made it take waaaaaaaaay longer. Tell me if I should add. I hope you like it!

P.S I’ll expand it when I get back to my laptop because I will be able to type 10 times faster.

P.P.S I’ll also tell you what the game should look like when I am able to use my laptop.

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I’m confuzzled. that might be good?!

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mabye a secret area+

I’m back :partying_face: :partying_face: :partying_face:

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Make a thing where it’s a gateway to my realm, The fog…

fog
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Heres the gate to my place… you need the entity to bring people here…

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