How's this... cause I'm wondering if it's good?

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1, this doesn’t belong in art, and 2, maybe add some props and more color to liven it up and get the player excited for the game?

the rooms wayyy too big I feel

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thanks for the help th3_ca1tsune

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I agree with th3_ca1tsune and Txme_Lxss.
Definitely add more vibrance and such to it.
The instructions aren’t bad though but maybe add some design to the text?

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Fun game!

I would:

  1. Maybe make the text bigger or the room smaller
  2. Add PROPS
  3. Put multiple spawn pads down (not required but its nice)
  4. Text looks good but maybe put fewer ...s

Looks like a good game though!

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likes
because I’ve been infected

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I put them there because the person who’s trying to talk is adding suspence

Ahh yeah that’s good!

It’s in like.
counting
EVERY SENTENCE
(did that sound mean? sorry if that did.)

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do you know how in games that it does to add spaces and shows different parts in the cutscences

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I LIKE IT.
you cant see all of that in one screen just saying

I have no idea how I’m going to make the bank

If you want it to be serious, maybe take away the emojis in the details?

Yeah you could also add hyphens - :arrow_backward: that

It’s in the title too lol

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try this or something:

"You’re here for one reason: To steal from the GimBank
They’ve got high security everywhere but I think you’ll make it alive. Good luck kid…

Details of the En3my:
Guards are in the front and back of the area AND they can spot from far away!
They’re aim… well let’s say it’s not the best.
The head guards is strong though and he’ll sh00t you down fast and efficiently.
Frost Giants will try to k!ll you whenever and however they can, with no limit to their actions. But that’s not all; They have some friends to call to their side: Ice Elves!
Ice Elves can freeze you in place…
(more enemies in the future)"

Add the emojis as you already had them. Is this better?

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Wut? Duh DUH DUUUUUUH!!!
Trasch: I think the emojis look better, me personally.

Ok
I just don’t like emojis positioned in a certain way because it makes me think of something I don’t want to think about
But yeah ok

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That’s not bad, I’m working on a bank heist map myself and that’s still better than my map

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I am right now!
image
I promise I’m not trying to advertise!

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