My Essay
This guide has been done many times before, for example:
So first, this is a duplicate.
Why We Don’t Like Duplicates
why do we need more than one guide on a topic? We have the information already, why say it again when we don’t need to.
Your Formatting
you have A LOT of pictures, which is good, but we could keep it tidier if we used text, and only used pictures when needed. Also, more dropdowns so its more divided and easy to read.
Why does This Work?
you show how to do it, but not why it works.
The title
the titles a bit wordy, maybe put the warning in the guide?
The introduction
introductios good, waiting for it to be great.
Conclusion
there is none.
Poll
obviously take away the uneeded options, because people are goofy goobers who like to choose 11/10 for everything
Drop-down Names
boring, don’t really catch my eye
Overall Rating
5/10
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