i got part of chapter 3
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My lore is actually so terrible. No one wants (and I am not cruel enough to write any) to read it lol.
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nice!
wait, what happens in chapter 3?
Yk that vortex agent hasnāt been defeated yet right?
Or is he already destroyed?
if so, Iāll rewrite
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i assume we defeat him
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aww cmon, no one is bad at writing!
pls, write us chapter 4!
rewriting I go.
we never heard about a 4th chapter wha-
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(do not include stuff in parenthese into the lore : fyi tennebris is the planet acoapalypes happens on, cause the ruins of the ship is on the acopalyps map)
After narrowly escaping the wreck of once was the BetaPrism, you are reunited with your fellow crewmates! As you are hurtling through space, Captain Mindy calls you up to look at something. It looks like Tennibris Base B#31 Is covered inā¦ greenā¦ plants? Oh. Oh noā¦ The Same Vortex Agent got to the Base first! Mindy is furious, and sets the escape pod into full speed, hurtling towards the Rocky Surface of Tennibris. You go back to tell your crewmembers and friends that, the Vortex Agent got there first. āHey! They got to the base! Get your Zappers ready!ā you yell as you hurtle towards Tennibris Base B#31 BOOM your escape pod rattles as the pod enters teh atomsphere. āCaptain, the angle of attack is too low! (angle of attack is the angle you are moving in)ā you yell as another jolt sent you flying into the wall. āAll stabalizing thrusters are jamed with muffins!ā the captain says. Moving into the exit hatch, your friends pry it open. You swing down, then burn the muffins into a crisp with your Evil Eye. What a waste of muffins. The captain jerks the pod up, swinging you off the ship. At the last minute, you grab onto one of the plant vines hanging from the escape pod. How ironic. You land safely, and head towards the Base. Meanwhile, the vortex agent, consumed by hate, was standing outside, with a pml, and a forbiden crystal. He holds the crystal up to the burning sun, redirecting the suns rays, leaving a giant shadow. Out of the shadow, he pulls out another shard of the Shattered Heart of the Void. He cackles āHA! Vortex will now regin Supreme!!!ā
āNOT SO FASTā You scream, as you and your friends jump out, holding gadgets, and telling him to surrender. Little did you know that it was a illusion. The Vortex agent then apeared behind you, with the shard, forbidden crystal, and Pml. He then started firing. YOu combat him relentlessly, but it was no use. Then, the captain says, āQuick Back to the pod!!!ā
You all run away to the escape pod. But then you had an idea. quickly use a syringe to extract chemical supreme out of the plants. then, you yelled"Hey vortex, eat this!"
You threw the syringe, and watched it, almost like in slow motion, as it flew towards the vortex agent. it hit a spare gear that cracked off the pod. a giant explosion shook the ground, as a truck-a-tron rose from the dirt and gear. It gave a mighty roar, and grabbed the vortex agent. he then pulled the shard of void out of him. Without the shard in him, he is overcome with remorse, and hugged Captain Mindy. But the truck-a-tron ate the forbidden crystal, and the shard. He became a glowing purple. He was about to eat u when, you told him " Hey, look, bud, I know ur mad, I know ur sad, but sometimes, we gotta pull through. WE are with you." The truck-a-tron then looked at you, turned around and left. It is said that after the gims left, the ground started to sprout whilrwinds, gravelers, from the chemical supreme.
END OF LORE!!!
U guys like how I worked the truckatron and acopalypes into it?
@here Iām done with chapter 2
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why is there a luxury sofa in the ship what (Iām talking about the ruins in apocalypse)
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Awesome!
Also thx for putting me in the credits
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HOLY josh YOU COOKED HARD
Now, I can mainly use that lore for the fight, I think Iāll use it and make my own lore incorporating building up to the fight.
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Also, sick lore (like fr its a 6/5 star meal) however, the vortex agent and Mindy, er, hate each other BUT I can make him feel guilty for what heās done and maybe apologize and allat
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Nice Lore! Except, I think Iām gong to make chapter 3 about destroying and sealing off the shattered heart of void, and itās going to take place right after chapt. 2. I will incoperate this intoā¦ chapterā¦ 4? 
youāll have to seeā¦ muheheheheheā¦
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Yes, at the end of Chpt. 2 you defeat the Vortex Agent.
NOTE TO ALL!
THE VORTEX AGENT IS INFACT CORRUPTED BY THE HEART, BUT IT IS NOT PHYSICALY INSIDE HIM. CHAPTER 3 IS FOCUSED ON BREAKING INTO THE FACILLITY AND DESTROYING THE HEART.
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oh, ok, so lets see, the essence is in himā¦
ok got it.
TY!!!
LOL jk, its ok if Iām not in credit. it ok.
I like writing fun lore anyways.
Ty Patrix! Good luck on the game!
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Nah ur getting in those credits boi
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OMG THANK U!!!
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buhmp
Idea for an actual gameplay concept (sorry if this was already suggested)
Poison -
Deals 2 DMG every second for a total of 20 DMG. Can be stacked infinitely to make the game simpler, and sources of poison check for the collision of a player every second, if itās a puddle of acid homeostasis or something, idk.
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Quick question: is this a help topic or a guide? I honestly donāt know. (if itās neither, there should be a section for topics like this.)
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